I won't lie, when I first glanced at the title of this poem, I thought it would be another poem about love and the mere details of the feeling. Boy, was I WAY off or what?

You see this man here on your left? He put the pen to Base Details. Although it is stated above, I'll just tell you again that his name is Siegfried Sassoon (1886-1967). After reading line 9, "And when the war is done and youth stone dead,/" I assumed he was a soldier in the Great War. After some research I learned that Sassoon did indeed fight in the first World War and after being wounded, Sassoon wrote a letter to the war department refusing to fight any longer. After his protest, Sassoon was hospitalized and began writing his highly accredited war poems.
In Base Details, Sassoon's usage of sarcasm is what mainly conveys his tone and message about war as a whole. More specifically, Sassoon uses polite sarcasm, which is when the audience realizes the speaker's polite statement/remark was actually sarcastic AFTER the fact. For example; let's begin with the very first three lines:
If I were fierce, and bald, and short of breath,/ I'd live with scarlet Majors at the Base,/ And speed glum heroes up the line to death./
Here, Sassoon is explaining how he would be acting if he were an older soldier. Initially, I simply thought that he was describing what he would do if he did possess the physical qualities given in that first sentence. Then I realized that Sassoon is actually mocking older soldiers. Their physical appearance and stamina (or lack thereof) is being mocked, as well as the fact that older soldiers tend to send off "glum heroes", younger soldiers, off to war to fight and be killed first, while they "live with scarlet Majors at the Base". Reading this the first time around, I hadn't quite realized the message in these lines. It is obvious that Sassoon's tone is sarcastic, which led me to see that he is depicting old men who wear a soldier's uniform but do not actually fight the war. He is showing that the older soldiers just sit and direct the younger ones into battle in which they will soon die in.
Later on in the poem, Sassoon begins to portray how an older soldier would act while the youngsters are off at war, actually fighting. Then after the older soldier reads on the Roll of Honour, he'd say "'Poor young chap,'", "'I used to know his father well;/" Obviously by placing himself in an older soldier's shoes, Sassoon makes sarcastic remarks about younger soldiers who have passed. It is funny how he referenced knowing the "Poor young chap"'s father, when he is actually the one who directed the chap into his death. This is a case of polite sarcasm because although it seems as though the older soldier genuinely cares about the young chaps, he actually doesn't.
Sassoon finishes his poem with "And when the war is done and youth stone dead,/ I'd toddle safely home and die-in bed./" The imagery in this sentence is actually quite pleasant; a little old man, toddling home and dying peacefully in his own bed. Although one's first judgment would be that Sassoon would have wanted an old man from war to die peacefully in his bed, he is actually mocking it. For this old man to have led many young soldiers into battle which only led to their quick death, to be able to die peacefully in his own bed is outrageously unfair. Sassoon's usage of polite sarcasm in Base Details helped to convey what it is like at the Base during a war and thus support its title.



Loved your post Jas! My favorite things about your entry's are that your voice shines through! It was so cute when you said "You see this man here on your left...?"lol I was dying. I also liked how you gave a little background info about Sassoons life. It was really interesting to read. It made me feel like I understood the poem a lot more knowing a little bit about why he wrote it. Overall, great job Jasmine!
ReplyDeleteI definitely agree with Liana on one of your strong points being that you included background to who Sasson was. He was a soldier who wanted to stop fighting and even went so far as to protest to get his desires granted. This little insight emphasizes the authority that Sasson has to speak on the conditions of the army so it was a very crucial part of your piece and made it even more sound. While I don’t agree that the speaker is trying to put himself in older soldier’s shoes, rather, higher ranking officers, your claims fully support your interpretation so it doesn’t really matter if I agree or not. All that matters is that I see where you’re coming from when you discuss your perspective through your claims. Not only did you talk about sarcasm but a different type of sarcasm which made me all the more interested in reading your piece. Polite sarcasm is not really talked about but it does apply to this poem and the fact that you chose to discuss that speaks volumes in terms of your thoughts on the piece. As always, your voice is very imminent throughout the whole piece and gives a sense of you are actually a human being writing this and not a monotone robot which makes your argument all the more a compelling read!
ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine! What a great post! Just like Liana and Ciya, I really enjoyed the little background information you gave on the author of the poem in the beginning of your post. I thought that was very clever and it definitely enhanced your post. I totally agree with you on the claims you were making about sarcasm. I made similar claims. However, one thing I thought that was very neat was that you described polite sarcasm. I like that you included this because it emphasizes the fact that the narrator was criticizing the Majors’ unwillingness to risk their lives by participating in war but he did it in subtle way. Through this post, I have seen such a great improvement in your analysis skills and your ability to write in a sophisticated matter that it also compelling. Just like these ladies have said above, your voice always shines through in your post which is something I actually need to work on so if you have any advice I would greatly appreciate it! LoL Well anyways this was a great post! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait to read more from you! Till next time, bye!
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